16420 SE McGillivray, #103-103
Vancouver, WA 98683
alt: janice@documentdriven.com
editor
Submission Critique Special:
Through Oct 7th, 2011, I'm offering a discount on critiques, $75 down from $90, for 1-2 pages of feedback on your Query, Synopsis, and Opening. (Please see the quote below.)
If you are interested, just email me.
From the September 2011 Submissions Workshop, a quote from a participant, who won the workshop at the Silent Auction at the 2011 Willamette Writer's Conference:
"Hi Janice!
Thank you for your thoughtful and helpful critiques. I especially appreciated your feedback on the synopsis. That alone was worth the time and expense to me.
Thanks again,
Gloria Geiser."
Why a Critique?
A submission critique is like a mini Manuscript critique--it can tell you what needs improvement, and even what might be wrong with your manuscript--before you submit. And for much less money.
As an experienced editor, I have written hundreds of submission critiques which have helped writers improve both their submissions and their manuscripts. Don't waste your own talents, efforts and time by not giving your manuscript the best chance for acceptance.
(1) Feedback--receive feedback on both your submissions and your manuscript, before you send them to the Editor or Agent.
(2) Improve & strengthen your manuscript--for submissions to Editors and Agents.
(3) You've received rejections already? -- Learn why you are receiving rejections.
Note: Response Letter for $ 90.00, one- to two-pages.
Other Submission Critiques:
Receive 1 page response re: presentation.
Receive 1 page response re:presentation and idea viability.
I will provide feedback on plot, structure, characterization, setting, dialogue, and P.O.V. I will also provide some brief feedback on the query and synopsis, the general presentation, and usage and grammar.
Please allow a 2 to 3 week turnaround time for submission critiques.
(7) File in .doc format.
(See Sidebar for more guidelines.)
BY MAIL: If you want materials returned, please include enough postage on the SASE.
Please send only copies of your materials. (Please don't send originals of photos or letters of endorsement.)
Print text on one side of the page only.
BY EMAIL:
Submit all materials within the body of the email.
Attachments are not accepted unless prearranged. And files must be .doc formatted.
(See below for Submission Guidelines.)
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16420 SE McGillivray, #103-103
Vancouver, WA 98683
alt: janice@documentdriven.com
editor